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Post by Austin Cunningham on June 28, 2014

I've been working on an outline for just one of four application essays I have to write for admission to an outrageously competitive school, which has been said to be the number 1 in the nation. The prompt is an explanation prompt, including both why I want to go to the school AND why they should except me (two separate questions in one essay), and I don't know if it would be more effective to start with why I want to go there OR why they should accept me, and I am also not sure how many reasons of each I should give (500 word limit). Do you have any advice as to what I should do? Thank you.

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Last reply by: Professor Hendershot
Tue Oct 1, 2013 12:27 PM

Post by carlos bara on September 28, 2013

Professor Hendershot, you're amazing. I really like the way you make things so simple and clear. Please give tips on becoming a better writer please. I freeze all the time. I guess I think to much, and at the end, I end up not expressing properly. Please give me some feedback.

Thank you professor

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Mon Sep 16, 2013 12:51 PM

Post by Kelly Jang on September 16, 2013

I'm kind of familiar with the mnemonic outline, and I use it a lot in my writings. But the thing is, if I'm not so sure about the concept - which means that it's not a safe topic, perhaps like the 'superhero' one you mentioned at the previous lectures -, what outline should I use? Should I use the mnemonic outline since I'm familiar with it and like improvising, or should I use the formal one just to be safe?


  • An outline is a written plan for your writing. It may be very elaborate or very simple. Think of an outline as a road map—it shows you where your journey starts, where you’ll go along the way, and where you’ll end up if all goes well.
  • A formal outline is the sort you’ve learned about in school. It has lots of numbers and letters and points and sub-points. It’s a very detailed map.
  • A formal outline has its advantages:
    • It’s very detailed, so it forces you to think about your writing in detail.
    • It’s easy to write from a very detailed plan.
  • A formal outline has its disadvantages, too:
    • It takes a long time to create one
    • Sometimes a too-formal outline will get you so bogged down in details that you lose the big picture.
    • Some writers find it takes the fun out of writing.
  • A mnemonic outline is far less detailed—just jot down whatever you need to remember your main points. It’s like turn-by-turn directions rather than a detailed map.
  • A mnemonic outline has its advantages:
    • It’s very quick to make—just jot down whatever will help you remember.
    • It gives you room to improvise.
    • It’s hard for anyone else to copy.
  • A mnemonic outline has its disadvantages, too:
    • It requires less discipline
    • It has fewer details (and some writers need lots of details)
    • If you forget what your mnemonics mean, you’re in trouble.
  • Use a formal outline if:
    • You need lots of details in order to stay on topic.
    • You’re not quite sure your idea will hold up.
    • You have difficulty remembering mnemonics.
    • You just feel more comfortable with the formal style.
  • Use a mnemonic outline if:
    • You like to improvise a little as you write.
    • You’re certain your concept is a strong one.
    • You’re in a hurry.
    • You’re more comfortable with the mnemonic style.
  • Test your outline on yourself. Imagine writing it. Can you see how it will go?
  • Then test your outline on a friend. Can you explain your essay without boring or confusing your listener?
  • When in doubt, choose the outline that works best for you. That’s all that matters!


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  • Intro 0:00
  • Lesson Overview 0:07
  • What is an Outline? 0:43
  • A Sample Essay 1:07
    • Prompt
  • Choosing Your Outline Style 1:55
    • Formal Outline
    • Introduction
    • Using My Brain
    • Advantages
    • Disadvantages
    • Mnemonic Outline
  • A Mnemonic Outline 6:45
    • Essay
    • Introduction
    • Thesis
    • Body Paragraphs
    • Conclusion
  • Choosing Your Outline Style 10:47
    • Advantages
    • Disadvantages
  • Which Outline is Right for You? 12:25
    • Use a Formal Outline If…
    • Use a Mnemonic Outline If…
  • Testing Your Outline 13:55
    • Test on Yourself
    • Test on Someone Else
  • When in Doubt 15:06